The Crititque
- A lot of the shots come across as well done and planned. They work.
- The overall idea for the project is successful. It definitely comes across as a good mix of Legend of Korra and Gangam Style.
- Characters are readable and everything comes across like it should.
- The drawings near the end are better than I thought they would.
- The project took A LOT longer then it should have.
- The boards are very messy and smudged. This really hurts how professional the project appears.
*Storing these boards in a box was a HORRIBLE idea. I had access to a scanner and I should have scanned them right away! What was I thinking!
- There are a lot of drawing errors as well.
- The final bit dance seen comes across as rushed because I didn't animate the background to go along with the figures moving.
- The project definitely comes across as more amateurish than something done by a professional that knows what he is doing.
- I GODDAMN FUCKING FINISHED THE BLOODY THING!!!! Despite moving three times, struggling to afford to eat, spending a quarter to finish my degree, living with an Aunt and Uncle that I eventually had to hide drawing from, and at one point having 32 hour work days, I somehow managed to finish the damn thing and get it posted up on the internet! That is THE MOST IMPORTANT thing out of all of it. Especially, given the difficulties that I was mentioning above.
- Now I really don't have an excuse for some of the projects I have been thinking about. If I was able to finish this one, I can finish other projects.
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